Tuesday 18 January 2011

Eighteenth Stone

Sunlight glances off white feathers
as the birds arrow and wheel
silver slivers slicing the blue,
like the glitter of the sun
off silver scales, as shoals
of herring arrow and wheel
silver slivers slicing the blue.


redraft thanks to ws

3 comments:

Wendy Sarno said...

Silver slivers! Marvelous repetition. Slicing thru the images.

Anonymous said...

Love slicing - may have to rework to include.

EMM said...

Lovely reflection!

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